im really tired right now.....oh yeah i have this song and i want people to tell me is they like this part that i am going to put down...

When life moves on, we begin to feel it moves to fast
That we are stuck in the past
trying to keep up with the future
we lose our tracks and begin to realize when life moves on we stay behind.



okay now i need to know wether you like it... and wether it would be a good song.......plus if ther is anything that needs to be changed?


Please tell anyone you know about it... as much comments the better.